Wednesday, October 17, 2012

New Short Story! - Freezing Dive

I have finished writing another short story and I want to share it with you! I was unable to find a suitable picture to go with it, but oh well. I shall have to draw one at a later date. 
Anyway, enjoy!
P.S. - It is a sort of 'cliff hanger', so prepare yourself.

Freezing Dive

Crack
The terrifying sound echoed through the solitary, winter gripped forest.
Everyone froze in dread as a long crack crawled across the ice from where the brave knight stood in the middle of the frozen river. He turned his head back to his companions on shore with a look of helplessness, and then, with a crash, the entire river of ice fell away beneath him and he disappeared into the raging river.
“Sir Isador!” The knights all cried in unison “Someone must help him! Someone dive in after him!” Some of the knights began to strip off their cloaks and armor, but she knew that by the time they removed their armor they would be too late to help the drowning knight. Sir Isador needed help now. And as the guide to the group, she, the mute girl, felt responsible for the life of the knight.
She threw her elk furs to one of the bewildered knights, charged forward, and dove headfirst into the rapid rushing water.
The freezing water shocked her and bit her skin like a thousand cutting razors. The current of the river swept her away as if she was a pebble and it pulled her under with its icy fingers.
She thought she had gone blind until suddenly, a dark, blurry image in the mass of foggy blue water caught her attention.
“Isador!” her thoughts screamed at her like the roar of the river in her ears.
Closer to the bottom of the plunging river and struggling against the water, the knight was being swept away as quickly as she was with the current.
She angled herself toward him and began to swim downward.
The river did its best to try and push her out of control, but she was able to use its currents to reach the drowning man.
The knight spun in all directions, flailing his arms and legs, trying to get his bearings, and swim for the surface, but to no avail.
She reached out and caught him by the arm just before it struck her face.
He clamped onto her with both hands and stared at her with wide desperate eyes. His face was pale and his eyes were dark and devilish looking in the icy water.
She grabbed him by the elbows and kicked her feet, trying to propel them both upward, but nothing happened. She settled to the bottom and hit the sandy riverbed with her feet to launch them upward, but neither of them moved. She tried to push him up, and when that failed she tried to pull him up with her. As soon as she pulled against his weight, she realized what was wrong.
“His chain mail! It’s too heavy! He won’t float! He is heavy as a rock!” instantly she began to tear his chain mail off.
He understood what she was doing and began to pull his arms out of the heavy mail and his wool padding.
“Air. I need air!” she turned him loose and raised her head as she zipped upward.
She broke into the open air with a heavy gasp, her lungs feeling cold and small would barely take in any air. She managed to take in several gulps of air, then dove back under the raging waters.
She kicked her feet and gripped at the water to push herself down to the bottom where she could see the knight “Oh no! He’s not moving!” she reached out and grabbed him by the shoulder of his heavy chain mail just as the current began to sweep her past him.
He reached out sluggishly and grasped her wrist with a weak grip, giving it a gentle shake as if to say ‘Farewell’.
Oh no you don’t!” she pulled herself down closer to him, pinched his nose and planted her lips against his, pushing the air from her lungs into his. He opened his mouth and sucked in what oxygen she had left.
She grabbed his chain mail shirt and pulled it up over his head along with his heavy woolen clothes.
He crawled out from under them then grabbed her hand as they left the armor behind and shot upward toward the surface.
They both hit the open air with a gasp then the knight lulled back under the water.
NO!” she gasped and pulled him up by the arm as his hand released its grip on her.
She wrapped her arm around his thick chest and leaned back in the water as she tried to raise his head to keep him from drowning.
A sudden crack on the back of her head caused lines of pain to wriggle across her vision, dazing her and almost making her loose grip of the knight. A slab of ice, with the stain of her blood on its sharp corner, floated its way around her head until she wrapped her free arm around it.
She pushed the floating ice underwater and leaned against it as she pulled the knight up and laid him on top of it, trying desperately to keep his head above the water.
When they were settled on the floating slab of ice, her eyes began to darken as her freezing, fatigued body grew numb and her lungs refused to take in air “Please give me strength” She prayed.
A limb from a fallen tree over hanging the river suddenly snagged her by the top of her dress, nearly yanking her and the knight out of the water.
She let go of the ice and quickly wrapped her free arm around the branch then tried to pull the two of them out of the water. As she struggled against his weight, the knight became tense and his strong arms wrapped around the branch, and he pulled himself up out of the water.
She grabbed the branch with both hands then, as she felt her resolve to live slipping away. The knight was safe. That was all that mattered. She might as well surrender herself to the river’s icy embrace.
Before she let go of the branch however, a strong arm suddenly wrapped itself around her waist and pulled her up onto the trunk of the tree.
“Come on girl….almost there.” Sir Isador croaked.
She grasped the half drown knight around the arm and the two of them helped each other off the tree to the snow covered ground.
They landed on the frozen ground with a hard thud, both barely able to breathe.
The snow felt strangely warm and she curled up, feeling that she could go to sleep right where she was at.
A freezing hand grabbed hers and clenched it tightly, brushing her icy fingers with a quivering thumb.
She opened her eyes a crack to see the knight smiling at her weakly as he held her hand “You are strong.” He gasped as his eyes slowly drifted closed.
She smiled back and closed her eyes, returning a gentle squeeze to his hand.
As the sound of the world faded, and the gentle whinny of horses echoed far away in her mind, one final thought crossed her mind as consciousness left her:
“I hope the other knights find us soon… or we shall freeze to death where we lie.”

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